Preliminary Task 2: Feedback

Critiques

• Do not have the actors waiting to begin their scenes
• Delete the main girl spinning
• Have the main girl lip-sync in a more natural way when she is on the couch
• Have the people at the bar engage in a more natural conversation
• Re-order the scenes so that the evolution of the main girl’s relationship make sense

Changes

• Add in a dissolve and a few other editing effects
• Delete the main girl spinning
• Have the main girl lip-sync in a more natural way when she is on the couch
• Have the people at the bar engage in a more natural conversation
• Re-order the scenes to have the evolution of the main girl’s old relationship make sense